Please give me your opinion for this essay

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good
members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The more developed the society is, the more people care about children-teaching. Some people think it is the parents' responsibility but others believe that school is the place for children to learn how to be good. In my point of view, I am in agreement with the former opinion, even though the other one also shows some positive aspects.
School plays an important role in a child's maturation process. Cause a child can go to school and make friends with other children at the same age, they can also learn about common knowledge which will be helpful someday. School is the second home of every child as they always have sincere sentiments from their friends or their teachers. Through different situations happen in school, youth can learn how to live in harmony with others and experience extraordinary memories in their student's lives. Additionally, thanks to school, our future generation can grow up in such a complete and wonderful way.
In many countries, for instance, in Vietnam, children often spend 8 hours per day in school. That means school just has an effect on children in a fourth of their's time. Then children will spend all of their time with their friends, their families and for themselves. That why family can have more effect on children. Otherwise, in school, teachers can not teach a child in a personal way because of the huge amount of works they have to take. But parents can do this easily. For me, personal education is the best way to raise a child. Each child has specific personalities and a child will suit a specific method. For example, some of them are very outgoing so boring lessons won't help them to become good people, they have to practice more than others and some children are introverted and they love discovering knowledge themselves. However, parents are the ones who understand their kids most and they will know how to teach them to become good people. Parents also have a lot of time, a lot of patience, and the most important thing is love. With love, parents can do the best things for their kids, help their children to overcome difficulties, and teach them how to love, how to become good people. I don't mean teachers can not do it for their students but parents often have more motivations and reasons for them to do all of these wonderful things.
Finally, I learn from my experiences that if someone, not only parents or teachers but also anyone who has a love for children, he or she can teach them how to be good people.