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the given chart highlights the data about the number of Underground Station's passengers in London.
Overall , in 8:00 am , passengers had the highest number in all of time , by contrast in 6:00 am ang 16:00 pm , the travelers composed minority in the chart. In the morning and evening, the number of people wanted to use the subway is higher than another time of day
Upon a detailed look, in 6:00 ,the travelers had a 100 people and were the lowest numbers . After 2 hour , the number of people that increased rapidly from 100 to 400 forced the majority in the morning. After that, the number of passengers were considerable reduction by 220 people .In the noon, the number of people grew up slowly from 180 to 300 at 14:00pm.
Regarding at 16:pm , the people who sink from 300 to 100 passenger in the period 4hour had the same number with 6:00 am. In the evening , the people had the highest number at 18:00 and reduced rapidly to 125 at 20:pm. From 20:00 pm to 22:pm , the number of travelers were around 150 people .