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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please give me some suggestion about my article
Hello guys, please give me some suggestion.
I think that I need to revise my article...but my brain is blank
thanks!
A Good Veterinarian
A good veterinarian must be caring. He will be reliable. For example, when he treats animals with expression of care in his eyes, we don’t worry that he will mistreat our pet. Also, we can be relieved about him. For example, if the clinic is very clean, neat, and less products sold, we don’t worry that not only animals will infect with each other but also he just wants to make money. And he will be popular. For example, when he sees the some poor abandoned animals in the street, he takes them back, adopts them, heals their illnesses and wounds, and provides a comfortable home environment for them. We can trust him that he will treat our pets in the same way, and we will be willing to go. Care is a necessary point for a good veterinarian.
I think that I need to revise my article...but my brain is blank
thanks!
A Good Veterinarian
A good veterinarian must be caring. He will be reliable. For example, when he treats animals with expression of care in his eyes, we don’t worry that he will mistreat our pet. Also, we can be relieved about him. For example, if the clinic is very clean, neat, and less products sold, we don’t worry that not only animals will infect with each other but also he just wants to make money. And he will be popular. For example, when he sees the some poor abandoned animals in the street, he takes them back, adopts them, heals their illnesses and wounds, and provides a comfortable home environment for them. We can trust him that he will treat our pets in the same way, and we will be willing to go. Care is a necessary point for a good veterinarian.
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A Good Veterinarian A good veterinarian must be caring and reliable , so that we don’t worry that he will mistreat our pet . His clinic should be very clean, neat, and non-commercial. We shouldn't have to worry that the animals might infect each other or that he just wants to make money.
- A Good Veterinarian A good veterinarian must be caring and reliable , so that we don’t worry that he will mistreat our pet .
- His clinic should be very clean, neat, and non-commercial.
- We shouldn't have to worry that the animals might infect each other or that he just wants to make money.
- He should be popular .
- When he sees some poor abandoned animal in the street, he takes it in , adopts it , heals its illnesses or injuries , and provides it with a comfortable h ome.
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A Good Veterinarian
A good veterinarian must be caring and reliable, so that we don’t worry that he will mistreat our pet. His clinic should be very clean, neat, and non-commercial. We shouldn't have to worry that the animals might infect each other or that he just wants to make money.
He should be pop
A Good Veterinarian
A good veterinarian must be caring and reliable, so that we don’t worry that he will mistreat our pet. His clinic should be very clean, neat, and non-commercial. We shouldn't have to worry that the animals might infect each other or that he just wants to make money.
He should be pop
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He should be reliable instead of will be. When he treat not treats. Expression of care is also wrong. Care is not expression but an attitude.He may and not will (as there is doubt)mistreat our pet. Instead of less products sold change it to 'not commercial'.
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When he treat not treats.No, your grammar is wrong, Anon. 'He' (3rd person singular) 'treats' (3rd person singular0.
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