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Tarenlg Posted 17 years ago
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Describe a memorable period / event from your childhood.


Form 1 is my memorable period in my childhood. In this period, I met six new best friends. We always stuck together. We will spend our time together after school, playing basketball, going to library, chatting in some places. I enjoy the moment we spent together because it had lots of funs. We were always surrounded by laughs. And I still remember we went to camping together. It was my first time went to camping with my friends. In this trip, I feel that friends were the only thing I treasured at that moment. Another memorable thing is that they wrote Christmas cards to me. I haven’t received Christmas cards from my friends before which moved me a lot.



After secondary school, we continue our journeys in different places. Some have gone to for study and some have promoted to form 6. Now, we can’t meet each other frequently as before but we still keep in touch though msn. Now I still remember the period we played and chatted together. I enjoy this happiest moment in my life and I won’t forget it.

  

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Hello, Tarenlg-- and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas and struck out some unnecessary words: Form 1 is my memorable period in my childhood. In this period, I met six new best friends.

  • Hello, Tarenlg-- and welcome to English Forums.
  • I have underlined some problem areas and struck out some unnecessary words: Form 1 is my memorable period in my childhood.
  • In this period, I met six new best friends.
  • We always stuck together.
  • We will spend our time together after school, playing basketball, going to library, chatting in some places .
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Hello, Tarenlg-- and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas and struck out some unnecessary words:


Form 1 is my memorable period in my childhood. In this period, I met six new best friends. We always stuck together. We will spend our time together after school, playing basketball, going to l

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