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The two maps illustrate the changes for road access to a city hospital after three years.
Overall, the most noticeable differences between the two maps are the separation of the public car park from the staff car park and the construction of roundabouts.
As you can see from the maps, in 2007, the car park on the corner between the Hospital Road and the City Road was allowed for both staff and public. In 2010, it was restricted to staff only, and the public car park was built to the east of the city hospital.
Turning to other features, two large roundabouts were constructed at two intersections of the Hospital Road with the Ring Road and the City Road in 2010. There were three symmetrical bus stops per side of the Hospital Road, but three years later they were replaced by an enormous western bus station, having two small roads accessing to the roundabouts.