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Some people think governments should spend money in looking for life on other
planets, while others think that there are many unsolved problems on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that life on the exoplanets has always been a magnetizing topic for everybody. While some individuals suppose that the government should invest more in the discovery of the universe, I would argue that we should pay attention to our own planet’s issues.
On the one hand, there are numerous benefits that can be gained from exploring other planets’ lives. Firstly, searching out for the “alien” may be the ultimate solution for major problems on Earth. To find another planet that has life existence may solve the accommodation deficiency issue for approximatetly 10 billions creatures hustling on our mother planet. For example, the found out of Kepler planet, which only shows the water existance, has opened a promissing future that humen and millions of other species will be no longer fighting for places to live. Beside, investing on this field will broaden our limited knowledge as a great number of people still believe that we are alone in this immeasurable universe.
On the other hand, I think we should focus on our internal issues on Earth. Firstly, there are various crucial problems that we have to immediately solve as they directly affect our daily lives. For instance, there are millions of children suffering poverty in Africa or billions of people losing their jobs due to the Covid pademic. These issues should be our very first piority at the moment. Futhermore, the Earth has enough unsolvable conflicts to deal with when every species dwelling on our planet fight with their own kind and the others. Hence, the seeking for the other exokinds lives may lead to a massive unexpected war.
In conclusion, although both seeking for life on other planets and focusing on solving our home planet problems are beneficial, I favor the latter opinion.
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- They add nothing, nothing at all, to the meaning.
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