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The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced.

The diagram given demo
nstrates the process of making leather products from animal skin.

As we can see, there are a total of 10 stages in the process. It commences with drying animal skin and ends with the skin being used to manufacture leather goods sold at stores.

The initial step involves the hanging and drying of animal hide, which is then delivered to a plant by lorry for subsequent steps. At the factory, animal skin is cleaned with a combination of water and lime, and this is followed by soaking it deeply into a vat of lime only. Next, animal skin is flattened by a rolling machine, and after that it is submerged one more time in tannin, a mixture of water and vegetable matter.

Once the skin has been soaked, it is then polished. After this stage is completed, animal hide is transported to other factories where it is finally used to make leather products that we see in stores such as bags, shoes, and balls.