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Topic: The chart below shows the results of a survey about people' coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

HERE IS MY ESSAY:

The given chart illustrates the surveyed results about people's consuming habits of two beverages in different Australian urban areas.

Overall, going to cafe for coffee or tea is the most popular choice in most cities, except Adelaide. The recorded number during the same period of time also reveals that the city dwellers prefer instant coffee than the the fresh ones.

Looking at the chart for more details, it is obvious that about 64% of Melbourne's residents going to coffee shops,and this number was slightly higher to the figure for Hobart and Sydney. Bisrbane is comparabably high with about 55%, followed by Adelaide with around 49% which is the only city where this category was not the highest. Meanwhile, fresh coffee accounts for the lowest proportion of consumers in all the cities.The figures for Sydney,Melbourne and Hobart are 44%,43% and nearly 40% respectively.Brisbane and Adelaide share the similarity in the level of preference with approximately 35%.

Turning to instant coffee, this product is the favourite choice in Adelaide with 50% whilst Hobart records the highest number among five cities(54%).Moreover, there is only just about 45% of people choosing instant coffee in Sydney during tha last four weeks while the figures for Melbourne and Brisbane was 5% and nearly 10% higher respectively.