Please give me some advice for this essay about advantages and disadvantages of buying what you need online

In these modern days, online service has been largely effective that a big number of people put a certain purchase on it. However, this development has both positive and negative sides.

The possible advantage of buying what you need online is saving time. In the past, people had to hang out to the supermarket or shopping mall so as to find fit clothes or popular makeup products. However, in the past few decades, most of the famous cosmetics have been sold online, both national and international brands. We just need to log in to the official website and choose which items we want to get. All of our items then will be purchased via cards. Also, clothes shops nowadays provide the sizes and prices so we can consider buying them without wasting time going to the stores then end up having no new clothes. Another good point of this service development is that we can buy things from overseas. For instance, if we wanted to order albums from Kpop stores which are not located in our countries, we could do it through some online sites that ship these things from Korea.

Though, there are some disadvantages of putting a purchase online. Firstly, we cannot be sure and guaranteed about the quality of products. Take makeup products as an example, you are not an excellent expert to check whether the shop had given you the real or fake items. Also, sometimes shirts or pants are turned out to be extremely bigger than expected. Secondly, the bad point is this service can cause less motivation for lazy people. Usually, hanging out to choose and buy necessary things such as food can be the only way for lazy people to getting out of their house. However, internet has increasingly risen and that makes homebody people have more reason to stay at home.

In conclusion, although buying things online can help people in some situation, it may have bad effect in out mood and daily lives.