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Writing task 1

The bar chart shows the results of a poll of theatre-goers on what disturbs them during performances at the theatre.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

This link is the picture of the bar chart ???

https://docs.google.com/document/d/144_F16S15fI8D2_X-y8T0EN4HlGry4Zilze_yC_kkIM/edit?usp=sharing

My report:

The information showed by the bar chart is a number of disturbance affects performances at the theatre which given by audiences. Three groups divided into are the human factor (both characteristics and actions) and the device factor. The first group is characteristics of human with Big hairdos and Tall people are 28%, 32% respectively. Three disturbances are Mobile phone picked up the highest figure (50%) which doubling than that of the lowest percent element – Flash photography and the among number is belonged to Bleeps with 40% that all of them fall into the group of device influences. Other elements laid in the final group with various percentages. The ranked first call name Rustling sweet papers with 90% (stand above all), followed by Arriving late, Coughing record a slight decline of percentage than that of the former (around 75%). Whispering, Sneezing and Snoring are about 15% apart, respectively; moreover, 20% rounded is awarded to Armrest hogging. In conclusion, we can see that having the significant difference about affect level of disturbances with three main groups.

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