The bar chart compares three different wards: Holy, Maple, and Oak in one particular hospital in terms of the proportion of patients who sent good evaluations with various experiences including hospital staff, waiting time, quality of treatment, and aftercare.
Overall, there was a majority of patients in Holy ward replying very good for all experiences while Oak ward received more “very good” from patients except for the waiting time compared to Maple ward.
Almost 90% of patients often replied very good after visiting the Holy ward, which was evaluated based on hospital staff, waiting time, quality of treatment, and aftercare. In terms of hospital staff, the proportions for Oak and Maple were slower, at 69% and 55% respectively. Over half of patients who went to both Maple and Oak room replied very good regarding waiting time. In contrast, when it comes to quality of treatment and aftercare, patients in the Oak room replied very good more 10% and 20% than those in maple ward, 80% and 70% for the former compared to 70% and 50% for the latter.
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