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The line graph compares the proportion of women working in parliament in five different European countries from 2000 to 2012. These countries are Germany, Italy, France, UK and Belgium.
Overall, there were more female members of parliament in 2012 compared to 2000. UK had the lowest level of women participation into parliament during the entire period except for the last year, when the value equaled that of Belgium.
In detail, in the initial ten years, Germany had higher rate of women working in parliament than that of the other four, but it was surpassed by Italy in 2010, at around 36%. France started out at 25% and increased steadily to 32% in 2012. 17% of women worked in parliament in Belgium in 2000, after which it was followed by an increase to just under 25% before a slight drop to around 23% at the end of the period. The period between 2000 and 2012 saw an significant rise from 3% to 23% in the percentage of female members of parliament in UK.
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The line graph compares the proportion of women elected to working in parliament (There are many people working as aides and assistants in parliament. ) in five different European countries from 2000 to 2012. These countries are Germany, Italy, France, UK and Belgium.
- The line graph compares the proportion of women elected to working in parliament (There are many people working as aides and assistants in parliament.
- ) in five different European countries from 2000 to 2012.
- These countries are Germany, Italy, France, UK and Belgium.
- Overall, there were was a higher representation of women more female members of parliament in 2012 compared to 2000.
- (You cannot refer to numbers.
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The line graph compares the proportion of women elected to working in parliament (There are many people working as aides and assistants in parliament. Members are elected.) in five different European countries from 2000 to 2012. These countries are Germany, Italy, France, UK and Belgium.
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