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Ssmm Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Please give me comments, advice and opinion to rewrite the following para.

Thank you for the opportunity to conduct the presentation for your logistic panel yesterday. It was a pleasure to meet everyone in the meeting. I am happy to learn that all of you agree *** would be a meaningful tool to deliver student about e-Logistic, supply chain and eProcurement concept. You and your team can raise out many valuable suggestions during the meeting. As confirmed, I will draft a brief course outline and proposed implementation plan based on our elaboration, hopefully by the end of this month. After I get the endorsement from my top management, I will contact you to arrange another meeting to discuss it into more details.

Again, thanks all of your help.
  

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I've tried to keep your words as much as possible. Best wishes, Clive Thank you for the opportunity to conduct my presentation for your logistics panel yesterday. It was a pleasure to meet everyone.

  • I've tried to keep your words as much as possible.
  • Best wishes, Clive Thank you for the opportunity to conduct my presentation for your logistics panel yesterday.
  • It was a pleasure to meet everyone.
  • I am happy to learn that all of you agree *** would be a meaningful tool to deliver information to students about e-Logistic, supply chain and eProcurement concepts.
  • You and your team brought up many valuable suggestions during the meeting.
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Hi,

Here are some suggestions.I've tried to keep your words as much as possible.

Best wishes, Clive

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