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Yenni Chen Posted 14 years ago
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This year, Miss Wenyuan lee gave herself a mirror wall as gift, a sincere gift after her own heart.
She left message on her Facebook. She metioned her parents have great impact on her. Her mom liked to look at the mirror of herself as she was the young lady. Her dad loves look himself at the mirror as well when he've become elder. At the same way,when her parents teached their kids lessons in fornt of a mirror. She loves mirror like her parents do.
"Music is the soul itself, morror is the vivid life itself. Indeed, a moving live can spining around with the melodic life tempo. Soul awareness need take care of itself every moment,always, "said her yoga coach.
She is very happy. WIsh everyone a Merry Christmas! May every inoncent heart deserve itself as the opportuniy of new born.
One of Miss Lee's friend, Teresa,gave a nice comment. " My professor gave me a mirror as a graduation present. She watned me remind virtuous and vicious of mine, compassion and understanding. After 15 years later, her mind as like a clear mirror wash away all her worries." Said Teresa.
She wishes Miss Lee the same for carrying and substain awareness.
It will be the worthy of remark as my new year revolution. So I wrote this story for wishing the best of myself. Hoping this coming new year for developing a better me.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year everyone!
She left message on her Facebook. She metioned her parents have great impact on her. Her mom liked to look at the mirror of herself as she was the young lady. Her dad loves look himself at the mirror as well when he've become elder. At the same way,when her parents teached their kids lessons in fornt of a mirror. She loves mirror like her parents do.
"Music is the soul itself, morror is the vivid life itself. Indeed, a moving live can spining around with the melodic life tempo. Soul awareness need take care of itself every moment,always, "said her yoga coach.
She is very happy. WIsh everyone a Merry Christmas! May every inoncent heart deserve itself as the opportuniy of new born.
One of Miss Lee's friend, Teresa,gave a nice comment. " My professor gave me a mirror as a graduation present. She watned me remind virtuous and vicious of mine, compassion and understanding. After 15 years later, her mind as like a clear mirror wash away all her worries." Said Teresa.
She wishes Miss Lee the same for carrying and substain awareness.
It will be the worthy of remark as my new year revolution. So I wrote this story for wishing the best of myself. Hoping this coming new year for developing a better me.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year everyone!
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This year, for Christmas, Miss Wen Yuan Lee gave herself a wall mirror as a gift, a gift that has special meaning for her. She wrote about the mirror on her Facebook page. She mentioned that her parents had a great impact on her.
- This year, for Christmas, Miss Wen Yuan Lee gave herself a wall mirror as a gift, a gift that has special meaning for her.
- She wrote about the mirror on her Facebook page.
- She mentioned that her parents had a great impact on her.
- And her mom owned a wall mirror that she liked to look at herself in when she was a young lady.
- Her dad also liked to look at himself in that mirror, even when he was elderly.
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This year, for Christmas, Miss Wen Yuan Lee gave herself a wall mirror as a gift, a gift that has special meaning for her.
She wrote about the mirror on her Facebook page. She mentioned that her parents had a great impact on her. And her mom owned a wall mirror that she liked to look at herself in when she was a young lady. Her dad also liked to look at himself in that mirror, even when
She wrote about the mirror on her Facebook page. She mentioned that her parents had a great impact on her. And her mom owned a wall mirror that she liked to look at herself in when she was a young lady. Her dad also liked to look at himself in that mirror, even when
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This is really good one which inspires me a lot. I tried to write it and express it in English for my journey. I was stuck and couldn't be able to write it in a natural way. It's really cool that Wen Yuan made it up for me. Thank you so much ! I am so grateful for that.
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