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I am applying to your Bachelor’s program of “Bachelor's Economics and Business” with specialization in “Business Administration”. My vision is to become a market research analyst and apply my skills to prosper my firm.

In high school I focused on mathematics and economics as my major. I continued my academic career with AP studies of Statistics, Calculus, and Economics. Through the studies, I not only made a systematic study of principle of economics, but also learnt the economical analytical method to interpret certain issues, such as Game Theory, Monetary and Fiscal Policy. However, not only academically, I also participated in various performances dealing with business strategy. These various studies and experiences founded my interest in business, and settled as international business administration.

At my first exposure to business, I was hired in the NPO that runs various competitions such as Model United Nations. This organization was founded for teenagers to widely experience activities that are hard to get. I was impressed by how the diverse roles of entrepreneur works and the merit that businessman has. I was especially surprised that, despite of the limitations as a high school student running the firm, the business has inevitable lure in me. Every step toward the opening the competition was fascinating with the combinations of contractions and paper works. The risks, the variations, all the aspects from experiencing business were the foundation of my vision. I want to study at your university and focus on BA because of the well-educated academics and professionals who understand the current rapid changes and growing complexity but am also able to grasp the reason behind it.

In several of the competitions during my high school year, I was the team leader responsible and leading the team of the business strategy competition. At the beginning of the program, teams were not settled and existed without any specific roles. Everyone was building castles in the air. Without any distinct goal, the team was wandering around the agenda given. As the team leader, I was responsible not only my role of the task, but also distributing project assignments and responsibilities as well as governing interpersonal relationships. By consuming my time as a team member of the competition, I saw particular emotions from my team members. I learned to understand those emotions, especially enthusiasm, can motivate others. My task was to lead those members to the goal and to present the team idea’s excellence to our judges. Business is, as I concerned, requires advanced skills in leadership and communication. I realized the crucial need of those aspects, with complementing my strong academic performances. I hope to learn and train those skills in your course.

I am fortunate to have an exciting opportunity in operating a Model United Nation as a Secretariat at the Changwon Advanced MUN. I always wanted to learn about how business works in real society. With the aggregation of 15,000 dollars by sponsors and entry fees from participants and contractions with hotels and convention centers for venue, I was able to take a step forward my goal of business. The interviews of recruiting member secretariats, contracts with venue owners, and organizing participants’ budgets all have gave me valuable experiences of founding my major of BA.

I want to study at University because of your outstanding educational system, the location of Rotterdam which hosts many multinational firms and international organizations, communicate with multicultural students to live in the globalized world. From the interviews about University with students and professors, I am confident with my decision. With many distinguished professors in Business faculty, such as prominent Dutch economist prof. name, I know that I will gain expert knowledge at the forefront of business. Further supporting professors’ lectures and the diverse culture of students will be the foundation of my future career. Moreover, by combining my practical and interests, I will gain critical work experiences. All these inevitable positives allow me to put my hands in the international business courses, and to pursue my visions and ambitions.

Old once said, “Throw me to the wolves and I will return leading the pack.” No matter how the wolves that I would face are strong, the last would be me. This is my way, the way of person eagerly wants to work and think globally, without the meaningless barrier of cultures and nationalities. I am now formless clay eager to be embodied. To be the most wonderful clay, and to be the clay that fits in all circumstances, I would contribute my talents and efforts to University.

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