There are people think expert athletes should not get high pay, however, the others think that they deserve high pay. People that agree with should get a high pay as they understand how much effort did they have made for this career but the others do not understand.
There are many reasons why athletes deserve a high pay. Most of the athletes start to retire around the age of 40 to 50, as their body can not compete with the young athletes. Next, most of the athlete they start training when they are small. They have to practice every day to train their body and push themselves to their limit to improve their skill. They do not have time for leisure as they have to go to school like others kids and use free time for practices.After that, athletes are very easy to get injured during training or competition. Some athletes are forced to retire as their injured cause they can not play the sport anymore some time may even not live a normal life anymore.
Even though, not everyone will understand how much did athletes sacrifice for today's result that they have. Frist, they only saw the result that the athletes have today but ignore the effort that athletes have put in. Then, people only remember how much glory have they bring for the country but not many people care what happens to them after they retire even they can even have a normal life due to the injured.
In conclusion, People that respect athletes and know how much effort did they put into and how much did they have sacrifice will understand why they deserve high salary, but for others does not know how much effort and does not care about them will never understand as they never pay attention to how much effort did athletes have put in to gain such good result and start to care about them instead of the glory that they have brought .
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There are people (missing word) think expert (unnatural) athletes should not get high pay, however, the others think that they deserve high pay. (run-on sentence) People that agree with (missing words) should get a high pay as they understand how much effort