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0I still remember when my family gathered around after one fine dinner.00 00All my sweats, come here and sit down.” I want to tell you about your sister’s attituded when she was a child, “ said my mother to us. I so excited to hear and just smiled when my mother when my mother started. She said about my stubborn, clumsy, careless, lazy, caring and funny.02br
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00“Ok! Listen carefully my sweathearts. During your sister around five years ago her palm was injured. It was because she was impatient and became clumsy when lunch time. She took her dish by herself by using chair. When she jumped down, her cloth attached to the chair. Thus, her dish was broken and her hand was touched the chip of dish,”” said mum emotionally. All of us were shocked. She told that, then I was sent to the nearest hospital and my palm was sewed up. I was put in child’s ward and stayed there for four days.02br
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00Other than that, my mum told that I never eat any medicine when I am sick. I still remember, one day, I was stubborned to eat the medicine. My parents tried and forced to me to eat that. But, I ran and hid beside the refrigerator. At that day, I am not lucky because my parents got me. All my family laughed at me. They asked me,00 00How about my feeling when I eat it? I told them that I felt suffered. After that moment, I promised to myself to take care and be healthy always.02br
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00Another of moment, my mum told us, I always careless when I was walked. My head bumped at wall around 15 times. My leg collided furnitures and cause my nail broke. Besides that, when I rode bicycle, I had fell because I unrealized there was a hole infront of me. This cause my knee injured for the tenth times. My family sympathy at me. My mum also told I was lazy to read books. But I was the first person who will watch cartoons. My parents advised me to read education’s book. I became lazy because I will fall a sleep when I read a book.02br
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00However, I also have a good attitude which is really care to my siblings. That was what my mother told. For example, when my young sister was sick, I helped00 00my mother to take care of her. I also sang them before they sleep. Besides that, I would shared food and drink together. My mother also said that, I am a funny person. This is because if any of my siblings was cried, I did joke until they smile again. Moreover, when my the family gathering together, I will make the situation more exciting.02br
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00After we listened the story, all of us laughed together. I felt happy but shy too. My mom always advised us when ended each story. She said, “we should be a patient person and calm down when do something. Futhermore, we have to improve ourself from time after time.” I will never forget her advises for my entire life.0-