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Jimmy phoned traffic cops to tell them to stop the purple car driving by old lady so they did it. This situation allowed Mellie to escaped from them traffic cops by driving neon type car so fast with fugitives, who are riding with her.
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This is how I would word it: Jimmy phoned the traffic cops to tell them to stop the purple car being driven by an old lady, and they did so. This allowed Mellie to escape from the cops by quickly driving away the fugitives in her car, which was a Neon.
- This is how I would word it: Jimmy phoned the traffic cops to tell them to stop the purple car being driven by an old lady, and they did so.
- This allowed Mellie to escape from the cops by quickly driving away the fugitives in her car, which was a Neon.
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This is how I would word it:
Jimmy phoned the traffic cops to tell them to stop the purple car being driven by an old lady, and they did so. This allowed Mellie to escape from the cops by quickly driving away the fugitives in her car, which was a Neon.
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