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Please fix the paragraph below. The context is a post about some points mentioned in a show review.
XYZ in the paragraph below is abbreviated form of the show's name.
It might be good to have a mention here about the video about XYZ facts we recently watched. The facts were mostly about the production of the show but a few of them were about me as they follow below which you may knew about. Maybe even some you didn't.
- I was born in Paris.
- I am adopted.
- My birthday being June 4th means I am a Gemini.
- According to Jack's saying Tom always had a crush on me.
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Karen15 - According to Jack's saying Tom always had a crush on me. This is very awkward and stilted. It would be simpler and more natural as: According to Jack, Tom has always had a crush on me.
- Karen15 - According to Jack's saying Tom always had a crush on me.
- This is very awkward and stilted.
- It would be simpler and more natural as: According to Jack, Tom has always had a crush on me.
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Karen15- According to Jack's saying Tom always had a crush on me.
This is very awkward and stilted. It would be simpler and more natural as: According to Jack, Tom has always had a crush on me.
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