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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Evidence of the internal ramp being used at the same time the Great Pyramid was being built; internal ramps tested out on 3-D software; a low density spiral shape found in the inside of the pyramid; and a way for blocks to turn corners, are the reasons why I support Jean Pierre’s theory of internal ramps.
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Change all the ; to , and delete the final , It's a hard sentence to read. I would switch the order. "I support Jean Pierre's theory of internal ramps because of a, b, c, and d.
- Change all the ; to , and delete the final , It's a hard sentence to read.
- I would switch the order.
- "I support Jean Pierre's theory of internal ramps because of a, b, c, and d.
- Or even consider bullets.
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Change all the ; to , and delete the final ,
It's a hard sentence to read. I would switch the order. "I support Jean Pierre's theory of internal ramps because of a, b, c, and d.
Or even consider bullets.
It's a hard sentence to read. I would switch the order. "I support Jean Pierre's theory of internal ramps because of a, b, c, and d.
Or even consider bullets.
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