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Letter Writing

Please fix my letter?

( I copied this letter from someone who asked to fix her letter from this website, but I changed a few thing. Please help me to fix it)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request more information about your BA Theatre and Performance studies.

I am a grade 11th student from (-----). Next year I am planning to study at your university. Could you tell me more information about it and types of scholarship I could receive?

Thank you for your kind consideration, and I look forward to receiving your response.

Sincerely,
Karen
  

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request more information about your BA in Theatre and Performance Studies . I am a grade 11 student from (-----) , and next year I hope to study at your university. Could you give me information about this program and what scholarships I could apply for?

— Mister Micawber

  • Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request more information about your BA in Theatre and Performance Studies .
  • I am a grade 11 student from (-----) , and next year I hope to study at your university.
  • Could you give me information about this program and what scholarships I could apply for?
  • Thank you for your kind consideration.
  • I look forward to your r esponse.
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request more information about your BA in Theatre and Performance Studies. I am a grade 11 student from (-----), and next year I hope to study at your university. Could you give me information about this program and what scholarships I could apply for?

Thank you for your k
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