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Topic:  Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.People believe that organizing an international sports event brings pros and cons for the country.First of all, it's beneficial for country owing to the fact that we could boost our own reputation from other countries. For example, located in China, Winter Olympics was well-known for its magnificent scenery and became one of the top inviting places for tourism all over the world. Secondly, having hosted a sports event may attract the media from every corner, given chances to be more viral on the network under public opinion. Moreover, being selected to be the host of a global event will catch an eye from popular trademark and endorsement of famous incorporation such as: Coca Cola, Porsche, Pepsi,... Additionally, the athletes are apt to win for home-court advantages with purpose to achieve most medal for their country.Nonetheless, there are ample shortcomings and controversial opinion put forward. The biggest problem is how much money invested to organize this kind of events? It costs an arm and a leg. According to the statics over 10 years of Olympics host country, each country has spent about 20 billion dollars on average in term of facility, gadgets, accommodation,.. for participants.In my point of view, I am semi-convinced by the second idea but totally agree with the first statement. I've experienced in a country which is the host of World Cup- France. This event had exerted a strong influence on the people, and even the atmosphere in inner city. Everywhere is crowded, hustle people rushing to come home or coming to queue with desire to have a ticket for limited event. And posters promoting for host's team seemed to be ubiquitous on street lights, on graffiti.On a nutshell, it's true that being a host of an sports event is a building block for a country to be equivalent to neighborhood.

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People believe that ~~organizing~~ (wrong verb. You can organize an event to be held in a different country.) holding / hosting an international sports event ~~brings~~ (wrong verb. ) would have both pros and cons for their country. (You did not give your opinion. That is required by the instructions. You need to write your opinion in the opening paragraph.)

First of all, it's (Do not use contractions in formal writing) beneficial for our country owing to the fact that ~~we could~~ it would boost our own reputation among ~~from~~ other countries. For example, ~~located in China,~~ the Winter Olympics in China showed off ~~was~~ ~~well-known for~~ its magnificent scenery and the city became one of the top ~~inviting~~ places for tourism all over the world. Secondly, ~~having hosted~~ a major sports event will ~~may~~ attract the media from every corner of the world, and it will be broadcast on many local TV networks, with millions of viewers., ~~given chances to be more viral on the network under public opinion.~~ (That makes no sense at all.) Moreover, being selected to be the host of a global event will catch an eye from popular trademark (That makes no sense at all.) and endorsement of famous incorporation (wrong word and wrong form) such as: Coca Cola, Porsche, Pepsi,... (Read my advice. Do not use "..." in essays. )Additionally, the athletes are apt to win ~~for~~ because of the home-court advantages. ~~with purpose to achieve most medal for their country.~~

Nonetheless, there are ample shortcomings and problems associated with these large events. ~~and controversial opinion put forward.~~ (That makes no sense.) The biggest problem is how much money needs to be invested to organize this kind of events? (wrong form) It costs an arm and a leg. (Avoid clichés in formal essays.) According to the statics over ten 10 (Do not use numerals; use words.) years of Olympics host country, each country has spent about 20 billion dollars on average in term of facility, (wrong form) gadgets, (wrong word.) accommodation,.. (ungrammatical series. You need a conjunction.) for participants.

In my point of view, (You need to put your view in the opening paragraph.) I a~~m semi-convinced by the second idea but~~ (Pick one of the viewpoints, not both) totally agree with the first statement. I've ~~experienced~~ have lived in a country which is the host of World Cup- France. This event ~~had~~ exerted a strong influence on the people, and even the atmosphere in inner city. Everywhere is crowded, hustle (wrong word there is no such person as a hustle person.) people rushing to come home or coming to queue with desire to have a ticket for limited event. And posters promoting ~~for host's~~ the French football team seemed to be ubiquitous on street lights, on graffiti. (Missing conjunction)

On a nutshell, (Read my advice) it's true that being a host of an sports event is a building block for a country to be equivalent to neighborhood.(That makes no sense at all. Do not put any new ideas in the conclusion. Only summarize the body paragraphs.)

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