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Topic: in many schools and universities, girls tend choose arts subject (language) boys choose science subject (phiscal) what do you think are the reason? Do you think that this tendency should be change? To what do you agree or disagree?

Answer:

Preconception about girls and boys is a problems fom past to present. One of them is girls tend choose art subject as language and boys choose subject like phiscal in many schools and universities. I think it's completely wrong.

Tendency is made by their parents and school. Almost people believe that boys smarter than girls and the boy will suit a job related to science. Moreover, some parents fear the science is hardly with their daughter because work under pressure and go out early and return late is factor effects the family in the future.

Society is changing so tendency should be change. More and more girls have talent about science and a lot woman work for NASA or lab. On the other hand, the boys can learn art subject. In fact, almost single, musicians, teacher, journalist, poet, is man. They are even more famous than the woman.

The last poin, I am strongly disagree with tendency. Because each people has strong point and weak point just based on the gender schools or parents can't decide they have to learn art or science. It isn't fair with the girls want to study science and the boys want to study art. The decide is effects to their future. In my opinion we should give the power to decide to children. They will have good results when that choose the favorite subject.

To sum up, I disagree with tendency. Decision what subject they will learn is power of children the world is different so should be respect their decide. Don't for tendency.