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Thanhtra287 Posted 14 years ago
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Please find my mistake on my job application

The reason for my application is because I am a business minded person with great passion for media. I developed my business management skill during the bachelor degree of Management at Manchester University. Practically during my internship at ANZ bank in 2010, I studied the strategic aspect of the banking industry by analysing business strategies, financial budgeting and capital investment with support from the senior management team. Besides the love with business, I also passionate about media and love to work in this fast paced industry. This is the reason why I took one year Practical Film Making at MetFilm School in London. During my time at school, I focused on both the creative and business side of television and filmmaking. An internship at Sky strategy will help me integrate my skills gained from previous working experience to be a professional strategist in media industry.

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I need to finish this application by this weekend and my english is so bad. I would be gratefully if you can find any mistake or better choice of word on my application. You are super star xx

  • I need to finish this application by this weekend and my english is so bad.
  • I would be gratefully if you can find any mistake or better choice of word on my application.
  • You are super star xx
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I need to finish this application by this weekend and my english is so bad. I would be gratefully if you can find any mistake or better choice of word on my application.

You are super star xx

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