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Lê Thiên Hoàng Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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The flim revoles around ,Whittaker- a widower man was 70 years old. He did not want to retirement, too.
That it.... He applied to the trainee for a selling fashion online company by Jules Ostin. She was a beautiful and also was CEO for this company.
  

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" The film revolves around Whittaker, a 70 year old widower. He did not want to retire. He applied as a trainee for an online fashion sales company owned by Jules Ostin, the beautiful CEO of the company.

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  • " The film revolves around Whittaker, a 70 year old widower.
  • He did not want to retire.
  • He applied as a trainee for an online fashion sales company owned by Jules Ostin, the beautiful CEO of the company.
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A widower is by definition a man, so you don't want to say "a widower man."

The film revolves around Whittaker, a 70 year old widower. He did not want to retire. He applied as a trainee for an online fashion sales company owned by Jules Ostin, the beautiful CEO of the company.

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I would use the so-called historical present for this whole plot description.

The film revolves around Whittaker, a 70 year old widower. He does not want to retire. He applies as a trainee for an online fashion sales company owned by Jules Ostin, the beautiful CEO of the company.

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