Please evalute - IELTS Writing task 1
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The bar graph clearly shows different types of transport used by young people from four different countries. Car seems to be preferred mode of transport in three out of four countries of the survey.
There are about half as many young people in Great Britain who prefer bicycle usage as that of car users. About 10 percent people use motorcycle as conveyance. The percentages of car users are same in Great Britain and USA. USA has the highest percentage of motorcycle users among all four countries with 30%. German young people have similar preferences between cars and bicycles as their mode of transport. France records the highest percentage of car users among all countries in survey. Young people in France share similar interests in using motorcycle and bicycle.
To sum it up, France youngsters prefer car and Germans choose bicycle as their favorite transportation with Great Britain and USA inclining towards cars as well.
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Where is the bar chart?
- Where is the bar chart?
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0The bar graph clearly shows different types of transport used by young people from four different countries. Car (wrong form) seems to be preferred mode of transport in three out of four countries of the survey.
There are about half as many young people in Great Britain who prefer bicycle usage as that of car users. (bad Eng
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