Please evaluating ielts writing task 1 - bar chart

The bar chart compares the percentage of people using 4 specific types of transport in going to work from 1960 to 1970 in one European city.

Overall, bus seem to be a popular means of transport in this city during the period. Meanwhile, a gradual increase was seen in the proportion of people using car to travel in their daily work.

During the 1960s, people in this european urban area chose to travel by foot with the highest percentage (35%), while bike was the second most popular at more than 25%. Car, at this time, was the least common with just over 5% before there was a significant growth in the proportion of people choosing this mode of transport in 1980 at 25%. However, there is a little gap in the percentage of using among 4 different forms of transport (around 10%) and bus represented the first choice of transport.

In the final year, car was twice as popular as bus in this time at more than 35% while people did not prefer to travel by walking with approximately one-third of the car proportion . Furthermore, bike become less popular in the new century with almost 5% of people travelling this means of transport.