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The illustration demonstrates a wave-energy machine's structural process and its installation costs based on the geographical locations.

Overall, it is a machined, cyclical process. It involves mechanical force created by water waves and producing electricity as its output from a wave-energy machine. It also shows the set-up costs incurred in the installation of a wave-energy device in different locations.

The first diagram displays how the electricity is generated in a wave-energy machine. The process starts with water entering into the bottom chamber through an inlet and creating an air force. The compulsion created by air rotates the turbine blades installed in the upper room and then exits to the bottom chamber. The electricity generator connected to the turbine produces electricity due to the mechanical force's conversion into electrical energy.

The second image depicts a wave-energy machine's geographical, financial, and productive comparisons based on their set-up locations. The deeper the engine's installation in the ocean, the higher are the waves, the installation cost and the output and these three parameters are vice versa if the machine is planted near the shore.