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Topic: Some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel.

It is thought that increasing the cost of fuel is the most efficient way to tackle global environmental issues. To this extent, while I accept that to raise price of fuel can improve the extreme level of problem, I also believe that there are many actions we need to taken.

On the first place, it is undeniable that increasing the fuel price makes a large contribution to environmental enhancement. Firstly, it is able to lessen the annual amount of fuel consumption. Because the cost of fuel is getting higher, consumers have to use daily materials as much economically as possible. Second, due to the reduction to amount of fuel used, the forests and mines can avoid being over-exploited, which gives nature a chance to recover its loss.

However, this is not the only solution which we can rely on to solve this alarming situation. Apart from that, local authority must raise awareness of citizens about the value of fuel and mention about facts that we are facing. Moreover, it is compulsory that the government establishes much stricter laws to prevent many people from exploring natural resources illegally even imprison them if the number of raw material is beyond permission.

In conclusion, if fuel market is evolving gradually, there will be many problems dealt at certain level. But as long as we complement all actions above, I convince that the natural problem we are encountering will be solved completely.