Please evaluate my ielts writing task 1

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My essay:

The given tables illustrates the number of motor car produced in three different countries, namely Argentina, Australia, and Thailand in 2003, 2006 and 2009

Overall, Thailand topped the list of car production during the mentioned period. Meanwhile, the second position was changed from Australia to Argentina in 2006.

In terms of Thailand car manufacture, which held the first position in 2003, the figure saw a sharp increase in the first three years, reaching its peak at 1162356 cars. By 2009, the number decreased to under 1 million cars, however, still maintained the highest figure.

The production of cars in Australia and Argentina were much more complex. Starting at 452163 cars in 2003, Australia ranked second among the three countries. However, there was a reverse pattern by 2006 when Argentina's production increased by one-third to 352759 cars, then surpassed its Australian counterpart (341268 cars). The gap was even bigger in 2009 when the former figure increased dramatically and the latter one witnessed a noticeable decrease, with 466089 compared with 245624.