Please Evaluate My IELTS Task 1 Essay (Map)

Cam 13 Test 1

The two maps give information about the transformation of road access to a city hospital in two years: 2007 and 2010.

Overall, this area witnessed significant changes such as development in bus system and separation of car park.

From 2007 to 2010, there are no changes in location of city hospital. The ring road around this building also remained constant. In 2010, two roundabouts were constructed. One of them was in the front of the hospital while the other was the intersection between Hospital Road and City Road.

On the outside of the hospital, there are two big renovations. In 2007, the car park on the east of Hospital Road was used for both staffs and public. However, three years later, they divided into public and staff car park. The public car park was situated on the east of the ring road while the other’s location unchanged. Additionally, six bus stops along the Hospital Road were demolished and replaced with a bus station on the west of this road.

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