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Our future:
Communication or dead zone?
Silence. Tension. Uncomfortable situation. You are in the XXIth century among people, who cannot imagine their lives without modern communication technologies. Things would not be so bad if the progress was not so great, to tell the truth. And we face its consequences every day, we ourselves are the consequences of this progress.
Technology started to develop our ways of communication so that we can now notice the communication through the net became one of our main daily aspects of life. As an advantage, the communication through the net saved a lot of our time, money, and energy. We can easily now send or receive an e-mail on click. We can do all our studies & work in one evening or day & become very successful. Moving on technology always develop its users, for example, social network websites, which allow individuals from all around the world to communicate in a very easy manner. Still Messenger, What’s up, Skype and so on even made it possible to have a video or voice call with a high call efficiency. In general, there is no doubt communication through the net is considered as technology development which is used by most individuals daily to keep them updated and on touch & its aim is to connect people all over the world.
However, modern technology is not only our present but also our future. What should we expect? Is the Internet the only thread for the Mankind in progress? Why should we be careful with our life in computers? Spending days & nights in different chats we risk to be cheated & to stay alone with ourselves. Using Facebook or other social networks we can forget how to communicate with each other in reality. Have you ever thought how ridiculous we look squeezing along the crowd of mobile phones/gadgets-equipped holding an IPhone or something like this in our hands & poking our fingers into them? What is more terrible, our children substitute their real friends & parents to these modern technologies. Do you think that soon the Internet technologies will substitute real communication? It has already almost happened, but we still have a chance to change the state of things.