Please evaluate my essay and grade it. Ielts task 2

A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses.
Why do many countries face water shortages, and what could be done to alleviate the problem.

These day, the world are encountering with a shortage of fresh water to use on daily basis of human. In this essay, I will discuss why people practice is to be blame for this issue and suggest some possible solutions.

The first causes for that is urbanization. There is a tendency for people to move from rural area to city and that is to say the concentration of million people in one place leading to the lack of clean water. That is because the sources of water surrounding such as lake, river are inadequate to supply for the enormous number of population that continues rising. For instance, these issue have never seen in countryside while urbans are suffered badly from it. To tackle this, the government need to bring in supportive policies that providing the citizen with job opportunities and houses in the rural area in order to encourage them to move out.

The another reason for that is the trash people thrown that pollutes the water. It is the fact that cities nowadays are full of waste, we can see it on the street or in the river and if this act was not prevented, we will no longer have fresh water. Immediate and zero-tolerance policies should be imposed for throwing litters indiscriminately. Like in USA, you will have to do community service compulsorily if you put litter at incorrect place.

To conclude, it is undoubtedly, that there are a range of reasons for this problem. So that now it is the time for government and local councils to take action in conserve our clean water, otherwise human life will be affected.