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Hi,Situation: I am planning as my manager for fulltime position, I want to send him email. Hi,Good Morning. You have any fulltime positions offering now...Please let me if you have any.ThanksIs this enough? How can I present this in effective way.. If anybody can modify this? can you add more to it..Thanks

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Netpicker9Hi,

Situation: I am planning to ask my manager for fulltime position, I want to send him email.

Hi,

Good Morning. You have any fulltime positions offering now...Please let me if you have any.

Thanks

Is this enough? How can I present this in an effective way?

If anybody can modify this? can you add more to it..

Thanks

How well do you know this manager? Have you worked with him/her for a long time or only for a short time? If only for a short time, your e-mail needs to be more formal than if you have worked there for a long time.

"I am interested in a full-time post, so I wondered if there are any full-time positions coming up soon? If there are, I would like to be considered and will be very happy to discuss them with you."

Netpicker9 · Answer

Hi,

"I have been with them since last year."

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