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NL888 Posted 18 years ago
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0Long live our college spirit!02br
00Long live Mrs. "Science and Democracy"!02br
00Together, let's push our Japanese02br
00civilization to the leading position again!02br
00Long live my alma mater!02br
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02br 00Long live Mrs. 02font 02br 02br 01font 00 02font 01h2 01font 02font 02h2 01font 02font 02br 02br 01font 00 (It was not written by me. But I am interested in how you native English speakers will improve its grammar) 02font 02br 02br 00Since 'our' is used earlier, perhaps it might be better to say01font 00 01u 00'our02u 00 alma mater'02font 00.

— Clive

  • 02br 00Long live Mrs.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00 02font 01h2 01font 02font 02h2 01font 02font 02br 02br 01font 00 (It was not written by me.
  • But I am interested in how you native English speakers will improve its grammar) 02font 02br 02br 00Since 'our' is used earlier, perhaps it might be better to say01font 00 01u 00'our02u 00 alma mater'02font 00.
  • 00However, the00 grammar's not bad.
  • 02br 02br 00But00 01font 00Mrs.
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0Hi,02br
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01font00Long live our college spirit!02br
00Long live Mrs. "Science and Democracy"!02br
00Together, let's push our Japanese02br
00civilization to the leading position again!02br
00Long live my alma mater!02font02br
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0Thank you Clive.02br
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00I guess that the writer 00thinks Science and Democracy is a graceful lady. Like a patriot calls his country as her, as a lovely girl.0-
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