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Bluefish Posted 22 years ago
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this is a part of an e-mail to a university, asking about a course.
please edit it.thanks!
Although I have studied mathematics, I have a strong interest in European Studies.
That’s why I am thinking of applying for the MA European Studies at Sussex University.
I would like to know if it's necessary to have a relevant first degree and which are my chances to be accepted, since I don’t have the appropriate background.
I hope that I will be given the opportunity to try and prove my knowledge and skills.
please edit it.thanks!
Although I have studied mathematics, I have a strong interest in European Studies.
That’s why I am thinking of applying for the MA European Studies at Sussex University.
I would like to know if it's necessary to have a relevant first degree and which are my chances to be accepted, since I don’t have the appropriate background.
I hope that I will be given the opportunity to try and prove my knowledge and skills.
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), I have a strong interest in European Studies. That’s why I *want to apply (more straight forward) for the MA European Studies at Sussex University. I would like to know if it's necessary to have a relevant first degree; and since I don't have the appropriate background (move it up), *what chances I have of being accepted into the program.
- ), I have a strong interest in European Studies.
- That’s why I *want to apply (more straight forward) for the MA European Studies at Sussex University.
- I would like to know if it's necessary to have a relevant first degree; and since I don't have the appropriate background (move it up), *what chances I have of being accepted into the program.
- (are you a good student?
- build your case) I hope that I will be given the opportunity to *prove my knowledge and skills (elaborate.
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Although I have studied mathematics (be specific -- do you mean you have BS in Math?), I have a strong interest in European Studies.
That’s why I *want to apply (more straight forward) for the MA European Studies at Sussex University.
I would like to know if it's necessary to have a relevant first degree; and since I don't have the appropriate background (move it up), *what chanc
That’s why I *want to apply (more straight forward) for the MA European Studies at Sussex University.
I would like to know if it's necessary to have a relevant first degree; and since I don't have the appropriate background (move it up), *what chanc
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