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NL888 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Please edit the sentence "Let's take time for such a serious topic"

I gave a try, but not sure whether the editing works.

Let's take time for a topic so serious.
  

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The meaning is obscure, and I think the original is too terse. — Let us take some time to discuss such a serious topic.

— Mister Micawber

  • The meaning is obscure, and I think the original is too terse.
  • — Let us take some time to discuss such a serious topic.
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The meaning is obscure, and I think the original is too terse. Is this what is meant?—

Let us take some time to discuss such a serious topic.
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Yes, it is exactly what it meant.
Should we edit it now? Or has it been perfect already?
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NL888Yes, it is exactly what it meant.Should we edit it now?
It's OK for me unless it is not quite what you meant.
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