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Bita Posted 19 years ago
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please edit the following letter ( urgent )!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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00With 00 00reference 00 00to your email dated 2007/02/20 regarding Fuel Consumption enhancement proposal , firstly we should inform you we are in 00 00extremity of time 02br
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00for opening L/C till the end of this Iranian year ( March 21 ) , hence don't miss the time and let us have your performa 00 00invoice as soon as possible.02br
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00Secondly , Although you are candidate regarding S81 project, the given discount is not noticeable , please consider the case and revise the price .02br
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00Finally, also please attention 00 00that SFC discussion is separate from discount matter.02br
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1font 00Hi Bita,02font 02br 02br 01font 00I'm sorry, I'm not entirely clear what some of your content means. 02font 02br 02br 01font 00We write in02font 00 reference to your email dated 2007/02/20 regarding 01font 00the02font 00 Fuel Consumption 01font 00E02font 00nhancement proposal. Firstly 01font 00please be aware that there is limited time available to set up an02font 00 L/C 01font 00before the end of the02font 00 Iranian year (March 21 ).

— Lil' Ruby Rose

  • 1font 00Hi Bita,02font 02br 02br 01font 00I'm sorry, I'm not entirely clear what some of your content means.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00We write in02font 00 reference to your email dated 2007/02/20 regarding 01font 00the02font 00 Fuel Consumption 01font 00E02font 00nhancement proposal.
  • Firstly 01font 00please be aware that there is limited time available to set up an02font 00 L/C 01font 00before the end of the02font 00 Iranian year (March 21 ).
  • ] 02font 01font 00for the02font 00 S81 project, the given discount is not noticeable 01font 00[either 'the quoted discount is not applicable', or 'the suggested discount is insufficient'].
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1font00Hi Bita,02font02br
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01font00I'm sorry, I'm not entirely clear what some of your content means. Here are some suggestions, but please check that I haven't missed your meaning.02font02br
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0Dear Rose,02br
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00 Thanks for helping me to edit my bussiness letter , please be informed that in last line how I should say that SPC disscsion is seprate from discount matter ? please let me know how to express it formally 0-
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0Bita,02br
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00I'm not quite sure if it's your company that is offering the discount or whether it is the other company? I read it as if the other company are expecting you to offer a discount because they are involved in your SPC project. If that is so, you could say something like:02br
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00Please also be aware that any discount offered is discret
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0Rose,02br
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00The other company should give discount to us . but we would like to say that matter of dicount is separted from project , these are two different things.0-
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0How about:02br
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00Secondly, your email does not reflect the level of discount we would expect, and we would ask you to review this and revise the price. As you will be aware, the matter of a discount is completely separate from your involvement in the SPC project, and the two have no bearing on one another.0-
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