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Student at schools and universities learn far more from the lesson with teachers than other sources (such as the internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Concern about the prevalence of education, the student should learn more lesson at schools and universities with the traditional method of teachers. While it is highly debatable issue whether the student should use technology to support their study with various sources on internet and television. I some agree with this belief as, in my opinion, both teachers, as well as technology are necessary for student broader horizon.

On the one hand, it is significant that the values of teachers for student education should never be overlooked. Because the teacher has knowledge on real-world education. Firstly, the communication with the teacher is also should be taken into consideration as a two ways information exchange. Obviously, according to feedback from students, a teacher is able to flexibly adjust their method among student as well as explicate step by step of studying process. As a result, the student could understand practical problems with detail guide of a teacher. Secondly, a teacher could make moral education available through an interactive process with pupils. The most student could get instruction, console as well as encourage when they facing the difficult. An illustration of this is installing right social value and ethics into minds of children.

On the other hand, the internet is of paramount importance by time effectiveness and speech of information for the student. Clearly, the internet brings a lot of information worldwide which could provide abundant knowledge and data. Moreover, internet source could record, describe, explain and illustrate any topic of any subject for their study. For instance, there is the number of website, blogs or forums with different fields of science, history or mathematics. Therefore, if the student could apply affordable method from the internet, they could expand knowledge.

In conclusion, both teacher and internet have special strength in education. If we consider the large amounts of information, the internet is highly advantageous. However, a teacher could play an important role to student absorbing knowledge.