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Karen15 Posted 9 years ago
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Please edit my paragraph

Hello,
Could you please edit my paragraph below so that it looks natural and correct:

I don't generally follow back and I am sorry about that. If you are a great fan of mine and because of that you would like me to follow you back please ask me in the comments so I will follow your account.

Thanks.
  

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I don't generally follow those who follow me, and I am sorry about that. If you are a great fan of mine and because of that you would like me to follow you, please ask me in the comments and I will follow you.

— AlpheccaStars

  • I don't generally follow those who follow me, and I am sorry about that.
  • If you are a great fan of mine and because of that you would like me to follow you, please ask me in the comments and I will follow you.
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I don't generally follow those who follow me, and I am sorry about that. If you are a great fan of mine and because of that you would like me to follow you, please ask me in the comments and I will follow you.
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