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Within 150-180 words, write an essay to the student forum in your school about your preparations for the coming university entrance examination.

In the 12-year period of time being at school, we have had so many tests, exams and contests. We should be extremely accustomed to the competitions and should have enough confidence in the success. I think, however, to meet one of the most significant challenges in a student's life such as the university entrance examination needs more prudent preparations for than other tasks we did before. My essay will thoroughly write about my plans for this coming entrance exam.

In my opinion, there are by far 2 most important elements we must prepare carefully, that are Knowledge and Psychology.

Let's start with Knowledge first. We all know that to pass any tests or exams mostly depends on how full and wide our knowledge can be. Therefore, I think it's good idea to review all the lectures and exercises in order to get the basic background. To be fully understanding in every aspects is a safe and sure decision to pass exams. We cannot rely on luck to cram only a subject that is likely to be asked about. In addition, I would go into important points of the lessons and then determine to study more carefully which one should be acquired in depth, and which one can be on the exam paper.

The second thing that worths concerning, as I said above is the well-prepared psychology. University Entrance Examination is very important to Vietnamese students. High school graduates  have to take it and try to get the best results to be admitted to universities. Even a slight mistake should be avoided. The pressure on the candidates hence remains very high. Mentality in some ways can affect the quality of the performance. So it's essential that I have to be calm and assured on the exam day. Consequently, I would be willing to share my feelings with my parents, my friends, especially with those who already experienced the university entrance exam. They would give me valuable experience and advice, moral support, courage and confidence. And at least, I can encourage myself that I don't have to be afraid of anything since I've prepared everything perfectly.I should believe in myself.

To sum up, A provident and cautious arrangement is a secret to pass every exams or games. I hope the mode of my preparations for this exam will be useful to you.

I know my work is not really good. Hope you can tell me which parts in my essay need edited. Thank you in advance!
  

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Here are some suggestions for the first part: During the 12 -year period of time being at years we have been in school, we have had so many tests, exams and contests that w e should be extremely accustomed to the competitions and should have enough confidence in our the success. (When you have so , you have to follow with that . ) I think, however, to meet one of the most significant challenges in a student's life such as the university entrance examination , we need more prudent preparations for than for other tasks we did before.

  • Here are some suggestions for the first part: During the 12 -year period of time being at years we have been in school, we have had so many tests, exams and contests that w e should be extremely accustomed to the competitions and should have enough confidence in our the success.
  • (When you have so , you have to follow with that .
  • ) I think, however, to meet one of the most significant challenges in a student's life such as the university entrance examination , we need more prudent preparations for than for other tasks we did before.
  • ( The infinitive clause can be the subject for the verb "require".
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Here are some suggestions for the first part:

During the 12-year period of time being at years we have been in school, we have had so many tests, exams and contests that we should be extremely accustomed to the competitions and should have enough confide
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