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Remember, you'd rather offend anyone but NEVER offend the archbishop. Or else, he will hunt you down even if you run to the corner of the world. And you will be sunk.
  

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Interesting story, FF. My version: Remember-- you can offend anyone else, but NEVER offend the archbishop. If you do, he will hunt you down even to the far corners of the world, and you will be sunk.

  • Interesting story, FF.
  • My version: Remember-- you can offend anyone else, but NEVER offend the archbishop.
  • If you do, he will hunt you down even to the far corners of the world, and you will be sunk.
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Interesting story, FF. My version:

Remember-- you can offend anyone else, but NEVER offend the archbishop. If you do, he will hunt you down even to the far corners of the world, and you will be sunk.

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