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MillinaireStatus09 Posted 16 years ago
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Dear Mr.Ted,

This is the info for all the transfer I sent, 5 transfers by visting a branch each transfer was made with the most amount posible minus the transfer fee,
I left $1100 in my account in an attempt to send another western union transfer using their online access as well,
but I am having trouble with their website at the moment because I was at a branch earler it wont let me send the last one until the next day.
I should be able to send it western union online tonight after midnight, If western union will recognize after midnight as the next day.
Thank you,

Parship
  

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Hello, Millinaire, and welcome to English Forums. In future, please post text for editing in our Letter-writing or Essay forums. Dear Ted / [Mr Jones], This is the info for all the transfers I sent : 5 transfers from Western Union branches.

  • Hello, Millinaire, and welcome to English Forums.
  • In future, please post text for editing in our Letter-writing or Essay forums.
  • Dear Ted / [Mr Jones], This is the info for all the transfers I sent : 5 transfers from Western Union branches.
  • Each transfer was made with the smallest possible transfer fee .
  • I left $1100 in my account in an attempt to send another transfer using their online access as well, but I am having trouble with their website at the moment .
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Hello, Millinaire, and welcome to English Forums. In future, please post text for editing in our Letter-writing or Essay forums.

Dear Ted / [Mr Jones],


This is the info for all the transfers I sent: 5 transfers from Western Union branches. Each transfer was made with the smallest possible transfer fee. I left $1100 in

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