0
Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Please critique this short paragraph for me.
Can someone critique this paragraph for me? I haven’t studied the rules of English in a long time, but it appears to me that there are some run on sentences in this paragraph or that in general something is wrong with the Grammar. Please help.
Quarterly Statistics are used in nearly every process for planning and managing Automobile sellers. The Auto Trader website will be required to foster wider acceptance of standard reporting packages, expedient interactions for field associates and senior management teams; flexible adaptation to changing market space as well as analytical solutions.
Quarterly Statistics are used in nearly every process for planning and managing Automobile sellers. The Auto Trader website will be required to foster wider acceptance of standard reporting packages, expedient interactions for field associates and senior management teams; flexible adaptation to changing market space as well as analytical solutions.
Top answer
Hi, Quarterly Statistics are used in nearly every process for planning and managing Automobile sellers. The Auto Trader website will be required to foster wider acceptance of standard reporting packages, expedient interactions for field associates and senior management teams; flexible adaptation to changing market space as well as analytical solutions. I think there are too many and s in the last sentence.
- Hi, Quarterly Statistics are used in nearly every process for planning and managing Automobile sellers.
- The Auto Trader website will be required to foster wider acceptance of standard reporting packages, expedient interactions for field associates and senior management teams; flexible adaptation to changing market space as well as analytical solutions.
- I think there are too many and s in the last sentence.
- Can you format it as a list of points?
- eg Quarterly Statistics are used in nearly every process for planning and managing automobile sellers.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
1 Answers
0
Hi,
Quarterly Statistics are used in nearly every process for planning and managing Automobile sellers. The Auto Trader website will be required to foster wider acceptance of standard reporting packages, expedient interactions for field associates and senior management teams; flexible adaptation to changing market space as well as analytical solutions.
Quarterly Statistics are used in nearly every process for planning and managing Automobile sellers. The Auto Trader website will be required to foster wider acceptance of standard reporting packages, expedient interactions for field associates and senior management teams; flexible adaptation to changing market space as well as analytical solutions.
0
Related Questions