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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago

Please critique poem

There is no one as lovely as she
Without her our lives, a sad existence would be.
God graced us her presence
to pass through our lives
And show us His Grace through her very life.
So sweet and so sensitive yet stronger each day.
We love you our sweetheart,
Lest not the world tear your spirit away.
  

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The last line made no sense. There is no one as lovely as she. Without her our lives sad existences would be.

— Mister Micawber

  • The last line made no sense.
  • There is no one as lovely as she.
  • Without her our lives sad existences would be.
  • *** graced us with her presence, to pass through our lives, and show us His Grace through her life.
  • You're so sweet and sensitive, and stronger each day.
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The last line made no sense.

There is no one as lovely as she.
Without her our lives sad existences would be.
*** graced us with her presence,
to pass through our lives,
and show us His Grace through her life.
You're so sweet and sensitive, and stronger each day.
We love you, our sweetheart,
Let not the world
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this poem lacks imagery, it is basically statements of someonez character. "there is none as lovely as she" show us this. the poem also made me feel concerned, not awed, just saying. use imagery, example (off the top of my head, might be terrible) her love like like a thousand candles lighting the darkest of hearts. a breath so warm melts the ice entombing a frozen soul.
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i think this poem is very good because the child was observes his surrounding carefully right?
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this poem teach me to discover more about what i see and make me more carefully person . thank you very much because you had help me to finish my homework during this holiday. now, i know my teacher not force us for nothing but she try to help us for our final exam this year
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