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0 Today I read the good article "05000". It says that a programmer have to spend about 10 years becoming a great programmer. I can't agree more with this idea. Currently, people want to grasp a programming language within 3 weeks or a month and they also want to become a project manager after two years. People dream to have an overnight success and don't want to spend 10 or 20 years in hard work. They want fast money and strive to become a millionaire within one or two years. Therefore, they choose university majors or jobs that will enable them to earn much money, but don't consider whether they are really interested in them.02br
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00I am a graduate of Computer Science and have worked for two years. Recently some of my previous classmates don't want to work as programmers any more and want to find a job in investing banks. They told me their current jobs as programmers are boring and painful for them. The reason that they chose to study Computer Science then is because IT jobs were well paid at that time. However current IT industry is not good as before and the payment is worse. They heard working in investing bank will be well paid and the bonus is big. Therefore they are considering to change their career and find a position in investing bank.Without passion for their work, I don't think they will feel happy and satisfied in work. Of course, they will not be willing to spend long time in hard work to succeed. Ten years is too long for them. But only painful and demanding practice and long-time hard work can make us achieve greatness. In fact, we need have passion in our work and also a little bit of patience.0230hrefhttp://www.norvig.com/21-days.htmlcTeach Yourself Programming in Ten Years