Please could you correct my cover letter??? Thank you

Re: Demand of training period



Lxxxxxxe, September 20^th 2008

Dear Madam/Sir,

I am at present student at the University of Metz in second year of a Master of International Finance to the Faculty of Management – School of business and I am looking for a training period in company for period of four to six months with effect from April 1st 2009.

I have already made several training periods and different seasonal jobs and I would like to strengthen my training and my professional project by making my training period in your company, and so to provide you with the knowledge and skills acquired during my training.

Moreover, integrate "a bank like ..." would be for me a real opportunity because I'm very interested in the fields of banking and finance and wishes to develop my career in this sector.

Finally, I think that my personality is in full agreement with my professional motivation. Indeed, I think I am curious, worried of perfecting, interested, I know how to adapt myself and I think I have the sense of responsibility and organization.

I hope to have convinced you of the sincerity and the quality of my motivation and that you will retain my application.

I am available for any information or for a possible interview.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully
Steph xxxxxxx