please, could you check my motivation letter?

Dear Sir or Madam
I apprecate this opportinuty to provide futher backgrond infarmation in support of my application for entrance to the University Transfer program at the Columbia College for the fall 2015 term.
Please allow to briefly introduce myself. I was born in a family with a strong belief in the importance of education. Being highly motivated by my parents, I have always striven to be the best student. In a few mounth i am going to finish studies in Tamos Education Phisic- Mathematic school with profound studying of English. ?aving not only deep knowledge of mathematics, physics and English, I constantly try to participate in diffrent variety of activities, such as school theatre, where I have a set of diplomas and awards; sporting events; participation in conferences on mathematics, biology and English; and a school fine art studio. Moreover I take extracurricular classes outside of school, including some sports, such as tennis, karate, modern and ballroom dances. Also I graduated from art school " Ymai" with a good marks. Furtermore my works were repeatedly presented at various exhibitions and received awards.
I enjoy communicating with people, having unique conversation and helping with all I can. I always try to learn cultural and national values. I without special difficulties find common interests with new acquaintances, but also I maintain the relations with friends from around the world. If one were to ask my friends to describe me they were introduce me as a diverse, active and an intellegent the person with positive views and purposeful desire to gain profound knowledge also works for the benefit of the successful future. I used to deal with a lot of different people with their thoughts and behaviour, so I am not afraid of doing some unusual works, i always take it as s challenge.
I try to develop in all possible to me the directions. The Russian and Kazakh languages to me are taught within 10 years. I am trained not only to grammar, but also respect for languages of the country.Also I am trained the French language. My knowledge in it isn't so deep, but I responsibly approach the object set by me. But I constantly try to improve myself.
I believe that my future career entirely depends on my current choise of educational program. Columbia College has an excellent reputation and known it's internationak emphasis. I am glad that the Columdia College would be an execellent start for my future directions. If i were applyed for the program, I would bring with me a desire to learn and an uvstoppable work ethic.
Thank you for taking the time to review my application letter and I will hear from you in the near future.
sincerely