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GIA1983 Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

please, could u look over my motivation letter for an airline?

hello

I try to drop a line in order to apply for an airline. I did my best but I am not sure about the results!

Could you have a look and tell me your comments?

thanks a million

Gianna

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am aiming at an Flight Attendant, and I would be grateful for the opportunity to gain such career in your company.

I’m an Italian girl of twenty two and I have always been fascinated by issues concerning airplanes and all the matters related. Since the beginning of my deeply interest in flight environment (when I aged just twelve), I have always tried to achieve my career aspiration: flight assistant. In order to make it easier for you understand myself it could be interesting to tell you what happened once: when I was a little child, I used to travel a lot and what I’ll never forget is my first flight to Europe because, as you can imagine, I was really afraid and uncomfortable, but the hostess made me as I felt at home, her kindness and her behaviour was absolutely unforgettable. After I got my school-leaving diploma in Colombia, I got away and Italy is the place where I settled down. However, since I moved to Italy I have not been really excited by my outlook of life as working like waitress and, my strong desire of travelling, getting new experience and broadening my mind led me to here.

As I attended a “Liceo Linguistico” my language knowledge are broad: first of all, Spanish my native tongue, followed by Italian as excellent level and a very good English. Unfortunately, my French and Germany remain still weak but I am quie sure that my high motivation enables me to strengthen them.

About my personal character if you are looking for someone who has good customer management skills, enthusiasm, flexibility, dynamism and problem solving attitude I am confident I am the person who you are looking for.

Working at the ...., which is well known for its outstanding customers service, represents a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity for me to achieve my goal.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration of my request. I look forward to your reply

Yours faithfully,

Gianna
  

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I am aiming at a career as a Flight Attendant and I would be grateful for the opportunity to join your company. I’m an Italian girl of twenty two and I have always been fascinated by issues concerning airplanes. (airplane is US English, aeroplane is British English, if that is important) Since the beginning of my deep interest in flight when I was aged just twelve, I have always worked towards achieving my career aspiration: flight assistant.

  • I am aiming at a career as a Flight Attendant and I would be grateful for the opportunity to join your company.
  • I’m an Italian girl of twenty two and I have always been fascinated by issues concerning airplanes.
  • (airplane is US English, aeroplane is British English, if that is important) Since the beginning of my deep interest in flight when I was aged just twelve, I have always worked towards achieving my career aspiration: flight assistant.
  • In order to make it easier for you understand my desire, I'll tell you waht happened when I was a small child and I used to travel a lot.
  • I’ll never forget my first flight to Europe because, as you can imagine, I was really afraid and uncomfortable, but the hostess made feel at home, her kindness and her behaviour was absolutely unforgettable.
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I am aiming at a career as a Flight Attendant and I would be grateful for the opportunity to join your company.

I’m an Italian girl of twenty two and I have always been fascinated by issues concerning airplanes. (airplane is US English, aeroplane is British English, if that is important) Since the beginning of my deep interest in flight when I was aged just twelve, I have always worked t

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