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The tables show how urban residents felt six different aspects of life were in 1980 and 2010.
Overall, education clearly received the most positive reviews in 1980, but in 2010, healthcare had the most. According to the residents, moreover, the quality of education and that of the environment declined, while that the quality of shops, healthcare, transportation, and accommodation increased.
In 1980, 82% of urban residents rated their educational services as good, as opposed to 6% who claimed these services were bad. Additionally, 72% of urban residents described the environment as good, and 20% said it was average. By 2010, however, the proportion of urban dwellers who felt education was good had fallen slightly to 76%, and the proportion who believed the environment was good had also reduced slightly to 64%.
Regarding the other categories, the number of good reviews they got grew over the period. Although only 64% thought healthcare was good in 1980, by the end of the period, this percentage had risen considerably to 83%, making it the highest. Positive reviews for shops, transportation, and accommodation, by contrast, went up by only 6%, 13%, and 9% respectively.
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- I advise students not to write essays when the task is defective and not to use sources with bad practice essays.
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- It clearly describes the options, the topics and the timeframe.
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First, there is an error in the data. Can you find it?
I advise students not to write essays when the task is defective and not to use sources with bad practice essays.
Here is the way to start an essay based on a questionnaire. It clearly describes the options, the topics and the timeframe. That starts out a high level of cohesion and coherence in the essay.
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